Morivou Posted February 29, 2008 Share Posted February 29, 2008 M_is_D Juji's Review of M_is_D's Piece: http://freewebs.com/jujehmufeh/january/COMMENT_-_Variations_on_Fado_de_Fogaceiras.pdf Morivou's Review: 1. Form (5) -Did they use at least 4 variations? Yes. -Is the theme strong? Yes. 2. Development (5) -Does the piece flow? Yes, it flows very nicely; you have a VERY good ear! Keep it up! 3. Notation (4.25) -The score is laid out correctly. For the entirety of Variation 1, when you have the piano part playing 1 note per measure, please get rid of the excess rests, and this goes for the entire piece but mainly here. (-1/2 pt.) -The score is neat, and is effective and practical for real life usage. In measure 25, the piano part seems unplayable Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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