Can't finish the piece

EDIT : I remade the piece, check the bottom of the page.

Well Tolga,

This piece confused me. The beginning was very video-game-ish, but then you just completely stopped and went to neo-baroque. I think what you have of your baroque section is fine, so you should delete the earlier section. I think that the subject of the baroque section is excellent. The entrances of each of the voices works, but the music starts to dissolve at :39. I would suggest deleting everything before the baroque section and everything after :39, then start anew.

Thanks mael I'm working on it!

Okay i remade it, its in the bottom

Yes, I think it is much better.

Though what can be improved (apart from reading that entire article on counterpoint)... (and harmony) is that when the first, second, and third voices finish their statements, there is a big pause. I think you should modulate to the Dominant key during that space, in order to build up energy.

Here it is. The pdf has a "TAB" section because I am using a program called guitarpro, sorry :)

So please tell me what do you think about this piece, and please take a look at the pdf because the organ covers most of the notes :D

Tolga.pdf

Tolga.mid