Lesson with darkangel2008hk.

Great, thanks. :)

Make more of the crescendo at bar 25.

Any other suggestions I have to make must wait until you've either done what I've asked or explained why not. (I don't want to force you, but I do want to hear your reasoning.)

you didnt force me to do that . i just try what you said and you remind me that yours ideas are more suitable than mine then i change

Sometimes music is hard to express by words however i will keep trying to express what i am doing

The dynamic will be add as soon as possible , according to my composition step , i used to add the dynamic after all the notes come out , i know that it may be a incorrect attiude , and i will try to change my attuide .

thank you

dark-answer and explan