The Dawn Comes

A few balance issues between horns and strings, but adds to the strength of the theme of the piece.

The Dawn Comes MP3-http://www.fileden.com/files/2007/5/27/1119251/The%20Dawn%20Comes.mp3

The Dawn Comes PDF-http://www.fileden.com/files/2007/5/27/1119251/The%20Dawn%20Comes.pdf

I think you linked to the wrong mp3

thanks for that i was in a rush but wanted to get my piece up and was dealing with two different pieces i had been working with. The actual piece is posted now.

Hi, the download for the MP3 says it's done, but nothing is happening.

I thought the piece started off dramatically enough, the images i got were of going through a dark spooky forest, which seemed to be set up nicely with that G, A, Bb, A, C, G theme. But the piece went on and more repetition of that G, A, Bb, A, C, G theme, and then it came in again and again. I felt we never really got anywhere Dawn definitely didnt come. I havent looked at the score but it felt like you stayed in the key of G minor the entire piece.

It was more lurking in a dark forest with evil spirits.

It has a nice dark atmosphere to it so thats my positive, i just feel you need to explore a bit more to where that theme can take you without repeating it like a mantra.

I dont like being negative but i feel there is a good piece waiting to come out it just needs to be found.

Thanks for the review, im kinda thinking about charging the name of the piece. :)

I know you shouldn't down your own piece but i kinda felt the same way in terms of i suppose closure in a sense. I couldn't figure out what it could be so i decided to post it as finished to see if it was perhaps just in my head.

You dont have to write the time measure to all orchestral parts. It's enough write only above the first part cause the score is supposedly read by you or the conductor.

Anyway the music is such a homogene one. I was boring while listening this...