February 15, 201016 yr Ahhh! The moment I clicked play, awesomeness occurred. Unfortunately, it's 2 am and my speakers were on blast. Was falling asleep. I'm wide awake now. "Some glitch" <- I can definitely see this happening. Maybe a computer virus of some sorts? Malfunctioning machines running loose in a factory? I liked the drums. At least I think those were drums. The main synth sounds really cool also. What program are you using? I really enjoyed this piece a lot!
February 15, 201016 yr I note somekind of wooden Bass which is very good, I think you could use a bit louder, if you're using speakers with subwoofer sometimes it cheat us about the low frequencies. All sounds are good, but the structure is a bit monotonous and repetitive, the main detunded element playing that sort of melody within the same intervals through the entire piece, I know there is not clear tonality but you could try somekind of modulation from to another ambient, by featuring different motifs and sounds. The end seems not to be the end, anyone could think is incomplete (or is incomplete ?) .... I think an ending is needed.
