June 23, 201015 yr sorry there are a few misstakes in this :/ :/ oh no! :D but i really hoped you enjoyed! bye bye :D
June 24, 201015 yr I like the engaging chord progressions and the frequent shifting of key. The repetitions remind me a bit of minimalist music in the style of Philip Glass. The beginning and the ending, with their large arpeggiated chords and ornamentation, is quite dramatic and adds an interesting contrast to the more subtle and contemporary middle section. Perhaps this middle section could be made a bit lighter--for much of the music I hear full chords accompanied by heavy bass, and having at least a few spots where the texture is less dense might help give a more interesting overall shape to the music. Cool piece, and a great performance!
