September 21, 201015 yr Composed for the most recent Cadbury's Flake Advert which can be found here:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XxWzdsTngx8 Innocence
September 21, 201015 yr It takes a true man admitting this, but this is actually heartbreaking listening The song is sad enough, but your title for it is really perfect. I wish it wasn't for the advert though mainly because I wish it was much longer :( It's a really beautiful song, and I think you should keep going with this one! However at the same time it falls under the impression of some famous writers as in poetry. The best ones are short, and great. I haven't checked out the link so I can't tell if the ending is purposely abrupt or not but it did feel somewhat sudden. Along with while the strings sound pretty darn good, there is still a longing for a better sound to them. I understand you probably can't get any better of a sound, but hey that's a compliment in my book since basically I'm saying this is good enough to be played live Really the only thing I can say is just polish the ending, and this is a really beautiful song Great work. -Matt
September 23, 201015 yr Simple beautiful beginning. I'd love to hear this with real instruments. Try adding something else, there is some melody in the piano, but maybe adding another instrument will grab attention for a little longer. Very nice, I would like to hear this longer because it is so dark, I love dark. Great piece.
September 24, 201015 yr This is beautiful. Very well done. The strings start to sound a tad synthy around the end (:55-end ) Great job!
