Trance Beat

So, I wrote this, I'm thinking about submitting it to a site for tv... but decided to put it here first just to see what the general reaction was....

Trance Beat

It's nice! The intro reminds me of a haunted mansion. I like the little "Fleeeeer" sound a lot, if you know what I mean. I didn't like the ending though, it seemed to happen too quickly

The Simsynth sounds good, but there are a few notes with Wasp that sound very very common, actually I think that's the default preset when you load the wasp, edit the preset a little...

Yes the ending sounds like incomplete, you need at least to create a final bar with the C, because it doesn't even finish the phrase, stops in Eb.

Or construct a little ending with something like AbM7, Bb6, AbM7, Gm7 -> Cm.

Nice! Really nice!

Thanks people

I'm not sure what you are talking about sys65 with the "simsynth? and "Wasp? I used Reason 3...?

Sounds unique! Much different than what I'm used to hearing. I lke this a lot.

Very cool. Nice atmospheric hits here and there. I believe SYS65 was talking about synths in FL Studio. They sound somewhat similar, but yours is more professional. Great work!

Intro: The intro wasn't that long. Not that that's a problem, but generally in Trance you have an atmospheric intensity within the Intro that helps set the stage for what comes later.

Buildup: The build up was nice, I think you could have played around a bit more with your ideas a little bit.

Breakdown: Where's the breakdown? The breakdown is one of the most important parts in this genre.

Buildup 2: NA

Outro: I think the outro could've been a little bit more developed. I like faded out intros where the music just goes to nothing.

This is a very large umbrella genre, imo. So take my opinions at face value. All in all, I think you have a nice -albeit short- track here. Would be well worth your time, I think, to expand on this.

Thanks people I'm not sure what you are talking about sys65 with the "simsynth? and "Wasp? I used Reason 3...?

Really ? well I assure you those plugins are a mere copy of the ones I mentioned, but with this you can realize who common those sounds are, if I mistook them for others.

Just move the knobs more :D

I don't know why, but this reminds me of the NCIS theme on TV. It's got the ambient sound to it, which I like. It's also the step-wise chordal movements that make it sound like a TV theme. At least to me. I dig the groove though. It would be the TV theme for a hip science-based crime show...or something. Like.