January 28, 201115 yr This is a piece that i have composed for the Modern Orchestra. Serve Edited January 31, 201115 yr by SYS65 Link to the Network fixed
January 31, 201115 yr I very much suspect this isn't a clear piece for orchestra... Well, this sounds good, a bit playful but very short, is practically a tiny introduction and the theme's exposition, you have to work on the development of your ideas, I think the best for you is to write larger piano pieces before writing for orchestra, is better to learn to develop, to expand your ideas first and then write for orchestra, that have the entire orchestra there and break your head trying to find out what to make they play. The theme wasn't bad, try modulating into different keys, create variations of it, etc.