Finest Hour (Draft)

*THIS IS BY NO MEANS FINISHED* I have just uploaded so that i can get some ideas and feedback! Thanks

Finest Hour (Draft)

well, ill try to explain what i think :hmmm:

not a bad piece, but some things i dont like:

start / 1'30''

too ripetitive in mood and orchestration, why the theme is always with horn? its boring...

1'30'' always the same thing is too much.

1'30 / 2'

ohh now i know that before was an "introduction orchestration" and now the main theme orchestration, but..... 1.30'' of introduction and only 30'' of main theme ?????

2' / 2'45''

reprise of the starting, but always same mood and intruments....

2'45'' / 3'20''

and of the first section with new melody and new instrument, melody is not significative.

etc then u repeat again the same things.

ok, its not a bad listening, but i think there are problems in variety and orchestration.

bye and good work !

Thanks

Perhaps i should have mentioned that i wrote this as a film/TV piece to a video stimulus. That might explain the timings! but i do get your point with the mood and orchestration elements - it needs some tweaking...

I am pleased you appreciate my work

this is a very nice theme. renowned composers such issues do not provide. initially taken a picture, just as if they see knights during ascent, but the jump is more of a pirate ship got misty. probably hiding somewhere in a little romance is unfulfilled. beautiful pictures brought me this song. commendable.