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There isn't any memorable melody. If you want to compose a polyphonic piece for solo violin then you have to give even more independence to each voice. Your melodies rely too much in the harmony you are using and that harmony doesn't seem to flow very well. 

31 minutes ago, Ivan1791 said:

Unutulmaz bir melodi yok. Yalnız keman için polifonik bir parça bestelemek istiyorsanız, her sese daha fazla bağımsızlık vermelisiniz. Melodileriniz kullandığınız armoniye çok fazla güveniyor ve bu uyum çok iyi akmıyor gibi görünüyor. 

 

thank you for feedback. The violin is hard to write polyphonic, some things need to be renunciation for. I think I need to improve a little more 

35 minutes ago, ClasiCompose said:

thank you for feedback. The violin is hard to write polyphonic, some things need to be renunciation for. I think I need to improve a little more 

 

Try composing a duet for two violins.

13 minutes ago, Ivan1791 said:

Try composing a duet for two violins.

 

two violins are not what I was looking for. Two violins have no limits (compared to a single violin). my intention is to achieve this in solo.