Skip to content
View in the app

A better way to browse. Learn more.

Young Composers Music Forum

A full-screen app on your home screen with push notifications, badges and more.

To install this app on iOS and iPadOS
  1. Tap the Share icon in Safari
  2. Scroll the menu and tap Add to Home Screen.
  3. Tap Add in the top-right corner.
To install this app on Android
  1. Tap the 3-dot menu (⋮) in the top-right corner of the browser.
  2. Tap Add to Home screen or Install app.
  3. Confirm by tapping Install.

Come To Be

Featured Replies

Hey all, this is kind of a dream pop/rock sort of song I wrote. Let me know what you think and cheers

  • 1 month later...

I love it! Would you copy and paste the lyrics to the board the please? Excellent harmony, catchy guitar solo, memorable melody in the voice. I forgot as I was listening that I was in the forum and wasn't listening to the radio. Really impressive! 

  • Author

Thanks! I'll post them here for you: 

You are number one, I am number ninety nine
You take all the capital, while I manage to scrape by
Thought I'd cast a couple votes, but I found that it's in vain
I don't even care at all, I don't even wanna bother with that thing

Ice is melting, green is showing, swallows in the air
Two of us in fantasy land, live without a care
Love is timeless, all arounds us, far as I can see
Maybe some day I've concluded, this could come to be

Always looking for a hit, they've got us hooked on dopamine
Now they've got complete control, over our flock it seems
We're living in the screen I say, not really in this life
I can't keep going on like this, 'cause it causes too much strife

Ice is melting, green is showing, swallows in the air
Two of us in fantasy land, live without a care
Love is timeless, all arounds us, far as I can see
Maybe some day I've concluded, this could come to be

I love the alternation between the bVI and bVII in the chorus and the last chorus has a great instrumental outro with some superb solos!  (but I miss a fade out as the recording sounds cut off at the end)  Great job!

Join the conversation

You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.

Guest
Unfortunately, your content contains terms that we do not allow. Please edit your content to remove the highlighted words below.
Reply to this topic...

Account

Navigation

Search

Search

Configure browser push notifications

Chrome (Android)
  1. Tap the lock icon next to the address bar.
  2. Tap Permissions → Notifications.
  3. Adjust your preference.
Chrome (Desktop)
  1. Click the padlock icon in the address bar.
  2. Select Site settings.
  3. Find Notifications and adjust your preference.