Where should I got with this? (writers block)

Hey yall, I just recently finished reading 1984 by George Orwell and was inspired to write a piece or pieces to match the novel. I drew inspiration from much of Shostakovich's works, but i struggle to continue writing since it is a such a slow and laborious piece.    

String_Suite_-_Cremation_of_the_Soul (1).mp3

I must say that what you have started off with is very representative of the novel's atmosphere, tone & story, and I wish you all the best in realizing this piece. 

At least after where you stopped, i felt like there could be a burst of notes (something quite diminished and dissonant) with *sfp* and slowly fades away before reinstating the opening again... but then maybe followed with a bit of development? 

Either that, or you could just let the piece slowly die off... ending as a sort of prelude before going into another section with different themes/subjects, this being a suite and all.