April 5, 20214 yr I really like the harmony in this piece. Using modal mixture feels very fresh and unique. My favourite part is m9-14. I think it conveys nocturne for me very well. m8 & m38-39 feel too surprising to me. I think they detract from the mood that you carefully built up. I'd feel more comfortable with these if they were developed more in later/earlier sections. I like that m8's idea reappears in m23-24, but they feel too far apart. Overall I like it, hearing this after midnight really got me in the mood 🙂
April 6, 20214 yr Author 22 hours ago, kwokon987 said: I really like the harmony in this piece. Using modal mixture feels very fresh and unique. My favourite part is m9-14. I think it conveys nocturne for me very well. m8 & m38-39 feel too surprising to me. I think they detract from the mood that you carefully built up. I'd feel more comfortable with these if they were developed more in later/earlier sections. I like that m8's idea reappears in m23-24, but they feel too far apart. Overall I like it, hearing this after midnight really got me in the mood 🙂 Thank you for listening and sharing your thoughts. I am glad you like it. You are right, maybe I should have prepared a preliminary for m8
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