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Serenade for String Orchestra


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This is a string orchestra piece I wrote to my mother. Thanks for any feedback

https://youtu.be/rUmz_OOGOno

 

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Hi, Maybe I am missing something here; however,I really had some difficulty following the thematic line and harmony in this work.  To me it wanders about.  It could use some high and low points and obvious resolutions as illustrated by the ending.

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8 hours ago, Ricardo Rochas said:

Every mother should have there own serenades!!!! This is beautiful!

Thank you for listening. I am glad you like it

5 hours ago, MJFOBOE said:

Hi, Maybe I am missing something here; however,I really had some difficulty following the thematic line and harmony in this work.  To me it wanders about.  It could use some high and low points and obvious resolutions as illustrated by the ending.

 

Hi, Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I was trying to create a harmonically different atmosphere here.There are no holistically predetermined cadences, so I get what you mean, thanks again
 
also I'm not sure how much it affects the listener, but A=422.5

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