ParsaNor Posted July 8, 2021 Share Posted July 8, 2021 Hi guys, this is my most recent and most ambitious work so far, I welcome your feedback on it. Cheers! https://musescore.com/user/33244543/scores/6861944 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guardian25 Posted July 11, 2021 Share Posted July 11, 2021 This is amazing! I cant really give any technical feedback, as I most study Baroque music, but from a modern point of view its amazing! Very animated, it reminds me of the old Tom and Jerry Cartoons, with the music changing with each scene! I really love this, I hope you share more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJFOBOE Posted July 11, 2021 Share Posted July 11, 2021 What is your objective here? For my taste - Too many harmonic shifts and thematic shifts and rhythmic changes . I would have wanted more development of the material. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParsaNor Posted July 13, 2021 Author Share Posted July 13, 2021 @MJFOBOE I get that, yes there is definitely room for more development, it is someitmes difficult to decide in the context of the piece to decide whether to develop more or shift, especially given Im relatively new to larger forms. @Guardian25 Thank you! Im glad that you liked it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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