A Dream

https://musescore.com/user/37307285/scores/6880219

This piece was inspired by Einaudi's Nuvole Bianche. Although I've not quoted from any of the melodies, I've used structural techniques such as repetition of the bassline on a new melody.

I feel like there is a lot of repetition and this makes it hard for me to enjoy going through the piece. We get like 9 measures of exactly the same melody (mm 5-8x2) which is essentially a tonic triad, feeling extremely static and stall, and the bass line is not providing another melody for the ear to follow either, being a purely harmonic support. The piece leaves me feelin like I just heard a long arpeggiation of various chords.

When the music transitions to something different, it feels extremeley abrupt, like we just switched the radio to another channel (the piece modulates and changes rythm very suddenly without preparing it at m.29, and does it again a few measures later).

All in all, it felt to me a little bit like a "copy-paste" of different ideas that may not be unpleasant in themselves but that are either very much overused, or put together in an awkward way.

This is just the opinion of a beginner, so don't mind it too much 🙂

EDIT: I hadn't listened till the end, but actually there's no end? I think you're missing a part of your score

On 7/22/2021 at 2:00 PM, DailyDuo said:

https://musescore.com/user/37307285/scores/6880219

This piece was inspired by Einaudi's Nuvole Bianche. Although I've not quoted from any of the melodies, I've used structural techniques such as repetition of the bassline on a new melody.

 

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