December 5, 20214 yr My first work using a small group of instruments. Before I had always composed for piano only. Constructive criticism is welcome! 🙂
December 5, 20214 yr It's nice if a bit reminiscent of Pachelbel's Canon in D. In some places in the D major section, in the Oboe and Harpsichord part you have A#'s which would work better as Bb's since you're borrowing from the minor mode (since D minor has a flat in it). The modulation into F major is well executed! In the F major section there's the same problem as in the D major. You use C#'s where Db's would be more appropriate since you're borrowing from the F minor mode which has four flats. Thanks for sharing!
December 6, 20214 yr Author 7 hours ago, PeterthePapercomPoser said: It's nice if a bit reminiscent of Pachelbel's Canon in D. In some places in the D major section, in the Oboe and Harpsichord part you have A#'s which would work better as Bb's since you're borrowing from the minor mode (since D minor has a flat in it). The modulation into F major is well executed! In the F major section there's the same problem as in the D major. You use C#'s where Db's would be more appropriate since you're borrowing from the F minor mode which has four flats. Thanks for sharing! Thanks for listening! I'll keep in mind the enharmonics.
December 7, 20214 yr Wow, I really like this! I've gotta admit, it's been a while since I've written a piece of music, mainly due to lack of inspiration. After listening to this though, I think I'll try again. This piece is magical. Keep writing!
December 8, 20214 yr Author 20 hours ago, SwiggitySwewgity said: Wow, I really like this! I've gotta admit, it's been a while since I've written a piece of music, mainly due to lack of inspiration. After listening to this though, I think I'll try again. This piece is magical. Keep writing! Wow thanks! Thank you for the kind words! It means a lot. Glad you liked it! 🙂
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