The Spirit of the Lake

Hello Guys,

I'm a newbie on this forum, this is my first post. I have been working on a novel nowadays, this is a dark fantasy novel. Its English name is "The Nakara Myth", but this novel is in Hungarian because I'm from Hungary. I decided to create some kind of "book soundtrack" for this novel. This piece of music belongs to the book. If you have an opinion feel free to share it with me!

A dark and grim piece!  I like the ending on a half-cadence - leaves one feeling like one has heard an introduction and I almost expect a narrator to come in with a reading of your book.  There is a place in the recording that seems jarring/clipped especially in the voice (at 1:39).  I don't know if that's fixable.  Also some of those phrases you have in the voice sound too long like the singer might run out of breath (1:31 - 1:45).  Besides just those few things this piece is very well rendered and produced!  Congratulations and thanks for sharing!  Do you plan on translating your book into English?  What is it about?

Thank you, Peter. I used Kontakt libraries for this piece of music, so the singer isn't real too. The book is about powerful gods and demons. I try to translate the promotional recommendation, but my English is not so well.

The Nakara Myth - The Cursed Land is the first book of a dark mood world-creating fantasy, which guides the reader into an original universe. The story is about the fight between powerful gods and demons. These supernatural beings use magical creatures and mortal people for their purposes. Atun, the creator tries to protect the world from Arkalla, who wants to destroy the whole Universe from her prison because of her revenge.