Alex Weidmann Posted May 22, 2022 Share Posted May 22, 2022 Hi all. Here's a piece I started writing at the end of last year. Like my other piece, "The Deep Ocean", I've used a combination of orchestral and electronic instruments. This time I used a wider range of synth textures, including Dream Pad, Free Lead, and Blade Sweeper. The piece has an ABA structure, with a Baroque style bridge back to the recapitulation of the A theme. I'm interested to know whether the Baroque section sounds similar to other pieces from that era? Far as I know it's original, and it came to me as a natural development of my B theme. There's always a niggling doubt though, that I might've accidentally reproduced something I've heard many years ago! I'd like to think the piece flows naturally; but perhaps the recapitulation sounds a bit contrived, like it's been bolted onto the end? MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Imported_The Sun Dappled Forest-0 > next 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omicronrg9 Posted May 24, 2022 Share Posted May 24, 2022 Very relaxing A section. The chorus is cool, and the transition to the B isn't awkward to my ears, not sure if I'd call it Baroque but I like it. The end doesn't reeeeally convince me but I suppose you were aiming for the kind of fading out effect in which a small passage is repeated with less and less intensity. In summary, nice, calming piece. Thank you again for sharing it! Kind regards ^^! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex Weidmann Posted May 25, 2022 Author Share Posted May 25, 2022 Many thanks for listening. With the ending, I had in mind the "Game Of Thrones" theme tune, which ends with a soft repetition on something like a dulcimer or mandolin. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan Allan. Posted May 31, 2022 Share Posted May 31, 2022 I love the beginning. You really achieved the effect of a sun-dappled forest. I also really like the Baroque section which reminds me of a Bach fugue in places and I wish you'd taken it further. But I'm not sure the 2 fit well together and I thought the ending was too weak. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex Weidmann Posted May 31, 2022 Author Share Posted May 31, 2022 Many thanks for your feedback, and kind words. I might try to expand the Baroque section, and rewrite the ending at some point. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
murphybridget Posted January 5 Share Posted January 5 (edited) I think this is good as it is. Edited January 5 by murphybridget 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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