hw1234 Posted October 31, 2022 Share Posted October 31, 2022 (edited) Edited November 1, 2022 by hw1234 MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu sq_1.custom_score > next PDF sq_1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted November 1, 2022 Share Posted November 1, 2022 Nice! Mind your cello range - the cellos can't play below the low C below the staff in bass clef. So your last note for the cello would just have to be an octave higher. I'm once again confused by your choice of instruments. You clearly intended to make this for a string quartet, but now you're using the ensemble patches for the strings. Just confused about that. Your harmonic choices are becoming more adventurous. But you still lack a long leading melodic line which would really help guide your music towards a goal oriented musical journey and development. I was surprised by the G minor chords in meas. 12 & 23. You're improving! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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