hw1234 Posted December 9, 2022 Share Posted December 9, 2022 Here is my favorite score i have composed so far. Thanks for listening MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Piano_277.custom_score > next PDF Piano_277 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted December 9, 2022 Share Posted December 9, 2022 This piece is much more varied! I love the left hand melody in bar 5-11! However I find bar 17-20 and 23 quite strange, since it is fulfilling a prefect cadence in the right hand but at the same it's a subtonic chord in left hand. Maybe the chord progression can be more functional. Keep writing! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omicronrg9 Posted December 12, 2022 Share Posted December 12, 2022 Very nice use of those fortepianos (though the first one is redundant because you come from f). Another thing is that you could've sustained the tension in the first motive by remaining in G in the second bar. Here: But it's only a lil' suggestion. I liked it! Kind regards, Daniel–Ømicrón. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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