hw1234 Posted March 5, 2023 Share Posted March 5, 2023 Hello just started to compose this sinfonia looking for feedback thanks MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu sinfonia_1_WIP (1) > next PDF sinfonia_1_WIP Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omicronrg9 Posted March 5, 2023 Share Posted March 5, 2023 Pinging you in case you haven't activated the "Follow topic" option. @hw1234 I will assume that you want to make a usual classical symphony and hence it'll have various movements. I will also assume that this is the first one. My suggestion: You want to develop. I would start by doing this: Then you add material that you think that could fit there and then after a while you make some epic transition to the material you have right here (amplified a little if you want), and then optionally write a coda. Hope this serves you of something. Kind regards, Daniel–Ømicrón. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted March 5, 2023 Share Posted March 5, 2023 Hi @hw1234, I agree with Daniel. Here only a sentence is presented. My feedback is always to extend your materials and passages! The first 4 bars are only accompaninent and you fo have interesting material with thst f minor chord in b.9. Pair it up with sf and use it more! Henry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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