May 11, 20232 yr Hi this is my second waltz written in C minor enjoy!n HW1234 Edited May 11, 20232 yr by HtWinsor
May 11, 20232 yr To be honest, it doesn't feel very Waltz-like, especially with the dotted rhythms in the second bar, and the left hand from 9 onwards. However, the theme sounds quite nice.
May 11, 20232 yr Hi @hw1234 @HtWinsor, I agree with @malumCompositor that from bar 9 onward it's not waltz like. For me it becomes a march! Also it's fine to modulate to c minor, but to end in it without a proper perfect cadence makes the C minor ending unreasonable! Make sure to add a V-i cadence if you want to establish it as the tonic key! Henry
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