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Violin sonata 4 movement 1

HtWinsor
in Incomplete Works; Writer's Block and Suggestions

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Hi here is the first movement to my violin sonata. enjoy! and please leave feedback.

Edited by HtWinsor

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    Hi @hw1234 @HtWinsor,

    7 hours ago, HtWinsor said:

    and please leave feedback.

    It's fine to leave feedback but make sure you have tried to adapt our ideas! Otherwise it looks like it's futile to review your pieces at all.

    In this excerpt you have a two part structure: The first dominated by simple meter and D major and the second by compound triplets and b minor. Please develop them! Have some voice exchange, since it's the violin doing all the melodic job, or they are in unison.

    In the second section you are just repeating the same phrase with no change and development. You can possibly use that b minor to modulate to dominant A major for the 2nd subject!

    Henry

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