HtWinsor Posted May 11, 2023 Share Posted May 11, 2023 (edited) Hi here is the first movement to my violin sonata. enjoy! and please leave feedback. Edited May 11, 2023 by HtWinsor MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu violin sonata 4 movement 1 > next PDF violin sonata 4 movement 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted May 11, 2023 Share Posted May 11, 2023 Hi @hw1234 @HtWinsor, 7 hours ago, HtWinsor said: and please leave feedback. It's fine to leave feedback but make sure you have tried to adapt our ideas! Otherwise it looks like it's futile to review your pieces at all. In this excerpt you have a two part structure: The first dominated by simple meter and D major and the second by compound triplets and b minor. Please develop them! Have some voice exchange, since it's the violin doing all the melodic job, or they are in unison. In the second section you are just repeating the same phrase with no change and development. You can possibly use that b minor to modulate to dominant A major for the 2nd subject! Henry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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