HtWinsor Posted May 12, 2023 Share Posted May 12, 2023 (edited) Hi here is my newest and favorite piano sonata I. have composed. Enjoy! Edited May 12, 2023 by HtWinsor MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Piano Sonata 4 complete > next PDF Piano Sonata 4 complete Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted May 12, 2023 Share Posted May 12, 2023 Hi @hw1234 @HtWinsor , I won't repeat the review I have given for the 1st mov. For me the 2nd "movement" is only a period. The harmonic progression is fluent and you should develop it! (again!) For 3rd mov: B.53 chord can be written for seperate hands rather than five notes for RH. I see it's in three part structure with I-V-I. Each section can again be developed. I like your coda with IV suggested and makes the PAC good, except you should make a stronger V chord. Thanks for sharing! Henry 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HtWinsor Posted May 12, 2023 Author Share Posted May 12, 2023 19 minutes ago, Henry Ng Tsz Kiu said: Hi @hw1234 @HtWinsor , I won't repeat the review I have given for the 1st mov. For me the 2nd "movement" is only a period. The harmonic progression is fluent and you should develop it! (again!) For 3rd mov: B.53 chord can be written for seperate hands rather than five notes for RH. I see it's in three part structure with I-V-I. Each section can again be developed. I like your coda with IV suggested and makes the PAC good, except you should make a stronger V chord. Thanks for sharing! Henry I'll work o your suggestions! Thanks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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