May 12, 20232 yr Hi here is my newest and favorite piano sonata I. have composed. Enjoy! Edited May 12, 20232 yr by HtWinsor
May 12, 20232 yr Hi @hw1234 @HtWinsor , I won't repeat the review I have given for the 1st mov. For me the 2nd "movement" is only a period. The harmonic progression is fluent and you should develop it! (again!) For 3rd mov: B.53 chord can be written for seperate hands rather than five notes for RH. I see it's in three part structure with I-V-I. Each section can again be developed. I like your coda with IV suggested and makes the PAC good, except you should make a stronger V chord. Thanks for sharing! Henry
May 12, 20232 yr Author 19 minutes ago, Henry Ng Tsz Kiu said: Hi @hw1234 @HtWinsor , I won't repeat the review I have given for the 1st mov. For me the 2nd "movement" is only a period. The harmonic progression is fluent and you should develop it! (again!) For 3rd mov: B.53 chord can be written for seperate hands rather than five notes for RH. I see it's in three part structure with I-V-I. Each section can again be developed. I like your coda with IV suggested and makes the PAC good, except you should make a stronger V chord. Thanks for sharing! Henry I'll work o your suggestions! Thanks!
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