HtWinsor Posted June 8, 2023 Share Posted June 8, 2023 This is my 46th bagatelle! Do you think I should extend the score or not? MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu BAGATELLE_46.custom_score > next PDF BAGATELLE_46 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted June 8, 2023 Share Posted June 8, 2023 Hi @HtWinsor, From your score it's in a ternary structure. For me the middle sections need to be extended. You have, agiain, many unnecessary perfect cadences for me like those in b.15-16 & 34-35. I like how you reach B major in b.23 by using C# minor as the pivotal chord (does that come from my suggestion on your previous post of the concerto?), but I think you should stay there much longer and start a new theme there. Also since this piece is in Baroque style for me, you can add more sequences to extend the pasages! Henry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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