bored_comedy Posted June 10, 2023 Share Posted June 10, 2023 (edited) Something I made a while ago and finished today. Edited June 18, 2023 by bored_comedy Fixed score MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu 208 > next PDF 208_fixed Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted June 12, 2023 Share Posted June 12, 2023 Hi @bored_comedy, This is real struggling music. There are many augmented chords and major 7th in it which is not resolved at all in the whole piece. The chord in b.6 & 27 RH is unplayable without spreading it. Also the last sentence is literally the same as the opening (ofc the meaning is different), so the scoring should be the same too. The tied notes are not too clean for me. Thanks for sharing. Henry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bored_comedy Posted June 18, 2023 Author Share Posted June 18, 2023 (edited) On 6/12/2023 at 4:39 AM, Henry Ng Tsz Kiu said: Hi @bored_comedy, This is real struggling music. There are many augmented chords and major 7th in it which is not resolved at all in the whole piece. The chord in b.6 & 27 RH is unplayable without spreading it. Also the last sentence is literally the same as the opening (ofc the meaning is different), so the scoring should be the same too. The tied notes are not too clean for me. Thanks for sharing. Henry Hi @Henry Ng Tsz Kiu, Thank you for your constructive feedback. I have fixed the anomalies that were found in the previous score. Any recommendations you have for composers who've composed in a similar style? I've been interested in adding more tension to the pieces I work on, and I'm not satisfied with how some of the tension in my score develops unexpectedly and rapidly. Thanks, BC Edited June 18, 2023 by bored_comedy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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