Hc123 Posted June 15, 2023 Share Posted June 15, 2023 Started this piece a while ago, trying to mimic a funeral march fit for a monarch, but I feel like it went a little off the rails at the end. I would just like some feedback on the overall flow of the song, and maybe suggestions on the ending. Should it end with a more optimistic tone or just continue the tone of the beginning? thanks so much in advance MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Funeral_March__THE_REGINA.custom_score > next Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted June 18, 2023 Share Posted June 18, 2023 Hi @Hc123, I think your ending here is quite optimistic! You have a D aeolian at the beginning but your ending is in G major. I think the modulation in 1:34 is too abrupt tho. You can develop more the D minor section, then modulate through D major to G major. Henry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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