bored_comedy Posted June 24, 2023 Share Posted June 24, 2023 (edited) A while ago, I discovered this piece, and from there, I got the inspiration to write something similar. I've developed a melody, but I really don't know what to do anymore. Any suggestions? I want to keep the mood and overall "improvisation" feel to this piece, just to add a sense of simplicity and organic-ness. I don't really like what I did around M12. However, I didn't know how to proceed. I share here the different versions. Edited June 24, 2023 by bored_comedy MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu TS TS_ > next PDF TS_ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted June 25, 2023 Share Posted June 25, 2023 Hi @bored_comedy, Maybe the next step is changing the texture and accompaniment? You're having thick chords here and you may just repeat the melody with the pattern change, like changing it to triplets? For b.12 you may subsitute it with different chords like G major, G7, G minor 7th, E-G-Bb diminished? Henry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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