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Tragedy at the foundry


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Something I am working. It’s supposed to depict a murder at the foundry and unraveling the mystery. Lemme know what you think, any suggestions on musicality or dynamics is welcomed.

 

thanks in advance

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Hi @Hc123

It was a really enjoyable piece, It has a perfect balance of lyricism and rythm, unfortunately, the soundfonts take away some of the beauty. 

I think that if you gave us more context we will be able to help you further! If it is depicting the inquiry, I think that a jazzier mood will be great (it's a bit cliché, I know hahah)

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