Wastavino Posted July 18, 2023 Share Posted July 18, 2023 (edited) Edited July 29, 2023 by Wastavino PDF Romanza - Violin y Piano - Score 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted July 20, 2023 Share Posted July 20, 2023 Hello @Wastavino, Welcome to the forum! This is an enjoyable romance in the romantic style! Most notable for me is in 02:26 where the modulation is frequent! Will you also provide the pdf score so that we can view in the details more clearly? Thanks for joining and sharing your music! Henry 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wastavino Posted July 20, 2023 Author Share Posted July 20, 2023 (edited) ---- Edited July 20, 2023 by Wastavino 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wastavino Posted July 20, 2023 Author Share Posted July 20, 2023 18 hours ago, Henry Ng Tsz Kiu said: Hello @Wastavino, Welcome to the forum! This is an enjoyable romance in the romantic style! Most notable for me is in 02:26 where the modulation is frequent! Will you also provide the pdf score so that we can view in the details more clearly? Thanks for joining and sharing your music! Henry Sure! here you go PDF RomanzaViolinyPiano-Score 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted July 21, 2023 Share Posted July 21, 2023 Hello @Wastavino, Thanks for your update with the score! -For me I think the Piano RH can start in a bass clef giving that the notes are low for a treble clef. -For the violin part I guess some slurs need to be added, while some are too long, as I see in the video the violinist (who plays beautifully) is following her own slurs haha. Maybe you can ask her bowing and mark them on your score as well! Other than these the score is detailed, and I don't mind those spacing issue as my score is probably messier LoL. Henry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted October 9, 2023 Share Posted October 9, 2023 It is a nice piece with clear melodies and motives brought back in a coherent form! My critique is that the piano is often very low. It seems that maybe you are writing the piano low so that it doesn't interfere with the Violin's melody and register. But I think the piano accompaniment can be higher than or even in the same register as the Violin as long as the Violins material is brought out with dynamics bringing its material into the foreground through its loudness and the piano's softness. Those are my thoughts. Thanks for sharing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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