violin scores 1 2 & 3

Hi I recently started on the violin and thought it would be fun to compose a few scores in celebration!

Enjoy.

Tēnā koe,

A few comments and criticisms;

• Some of the articulation you've written is simply not playable on the violin, especially the big old slur in bar 26, piece one. This is a common mistakes with pianists starting to write for violin, so dont feel bad about yourself. I'd just get rid of that slur as it has no use and is unplayable.
• Also, some of the chords you've written are impossible to play such as the bare-fifth G major in Bar 7 of piece one. You should chnage that top G to a B on the A-string to both complete the triad, and make it playable.
• You're melodic ideas are good, but your pieces seem to lack form. 

There nothing else really to say. Keep writing music and keep improving.

Nga Mihi,

Arjuna