The Wager of the Colors

Hello everyone, this is a more complete version of the WIP song I uploaded 2 months ago. I gave the melody more variation, cleaned up scoring errors, and made bland parts more interesting, like the chromatic passage. I would greatly appreciate any advice/questions.

Edited September 15, 20232 yr by Loctobers

Very nice!
I like the development and variation of the melody. It was all very coherent and flowed quite well.
My only criticism is just to tone down a few sections here and their (excluding the big climax of course) to add a bit more contrast.
Great work, it was nice to hear this!

Hello @Loctobers,

This is quite an exciting piece! Nice orchestral colour within particular the use of percussion instruments like bell or glockenspiel during the middle sections. For me maybe you can aim for contrasting sections with modulations, since your piece stays in Eb minor (or Aeolian) for the whole piece! The overall effect is exciting but can seem less exciting when audiences start getting used to the hype. Thx for sharing!

Henry