October 8, 20232 yr wasn't expecting the bombastic ending, but what happened happened this isn't really my usual style, just practice. the last chords need balancing
October 9, 20232 yr Very nice - lively for most part mixed with quieter chorale-like moments. Whether you think the final chord needs rebalancing, the overall balance came over fine. The contrast between the staccatos and lyrical phrases sounded well especially when they changed players, like when the horns played a phrase, reiterated or expanded next in the trumpets etc. I haven't looked at the score in fine detail but the engraving looks accomplished and in good detail. Nothing to crit - it's just a happy piece. Elevating. The end towers up nicely. Congrats.
October 10, 20232 yr Hi @veps, This is a real lively and enjoyable piece. I like those xylophone and glockenspiel very much. Like @Quinn said the contrasting timbre and articulation are great. I actually like the bombastic brassy ending very much, as it push the joviality and happiness to its extreme. Thx for sharing this lovely piece! Henry
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