Consolación - Flute & piano

I just came with this little piece, It has been a while since I compose something new.

I think it sounds a little bit like claude bolling's sentimentale.

Let me know what you think 🙂

Very nice piece. Makes me think of schubert lieder for some reason. I think one critique i have is that in the first four bars which are the intro you use something slightly diffrent than the main ideas in bar 5. To have a more clear feel of clear continuation try to think more of variation of the same ideas instead of thinking of completly new ideas. The new ideas must somehow be born from a previous idea or be related some way. I would recomend listening to Schuberts lider to get an idea of what I mean 🙂

Hi,

I really like your Flute line and harmonic movement.  The balance between the piano bass and flute line is off balance ... so the bass line sounds quite loud.  The effect is made more prevalent by the heavy/multi note left hand and also by the accompaniment is very square - always on the first beat of the measure.  I think reworking to lessen bass line would enhance the work.

Mark

Very melodically enjoyable piece, though I would pay attention to MJFOBOE's advice on the sound balance. Everything sounds too loud, there's no sense of dynamic range. 

Apart from that and score-wise, the software you used must have exported the .pdf terribly. Just to put an example:



The very last 4 measures were extremely beautiful. Thank you for sharing this here!

Kind regards,
Daniel–Ømicrón.