Derek Pintozzi Posted January 15 Share Posted January 15 This is my first duet, I made it to play with my friend. Let me know what you liked and what needs work. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu 25_12 2 > next 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PCC Posted January 15 Share Posted January 15 wrong section mate, post here https://www.youngcomposers.com/f166/chamber-music/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted January 15 Share Posted January 15 29 minutes ago, PCC said: wrong section mate, post here https://www.youngcomposers.com/f166/chamber-music Moves to chamber music forum, thx for your reminder! Henry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted January 18 Share Posted January 18 Hello @Derek Pintozzi, Welcome to the forum! I love that it has expressive melody and some interesting harmony like the augmented A-C#-F chord. I love your constant use of augmented chords throughout the piece. I really love viola playing melody which gives me mellow feeling. In around 1:40 I like you try viola’s higher range! I love its high register. In 2:30 you go for piu Mosso with some good contrast of tempo and texture. The structure is appropriate with the climax at the end. What I think you can work on is that you put all the melodic significance to the viola and the piano receives almost no melody! For me as a chamber work the interaction between players is important, and having one instrument sticking to one role makes the piece less varied. But still I enjoy this melancholic piece! Thx for joining us sharing your music here! Henry 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jejrekmek Posted January 19 Share Posted January 19 according to the "works with few reviews" section this post has negative 1 replies so thats pretty cool congrats on that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted January 19 Share Posted January 19 32 minutes ago, jejrekmek said: according to the "works with few reviews" section this post has negative 1 replies so thats pretty cool congrats on that It happens when a comment is left before it is moved to another subforum! Henry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Derek Pintozzi Posted January 21 Author Share Posted January 21 On 1/19/2024 at 6:05 PM, jejrekmek said: according to the "works with few reviews" section this post has negative 1 replies so thats pretty cool congrats on that Thanks man 🙏 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mason M Posted January 21 Share Posted January 21 Hauntingly beautiful work! I found myself engaged throughout and the ending is perfect. Thanks for sharing! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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