Layne Posted January 15 Share Posted January 15 Hello fellow composers! Today I bring a song inspired by the genre of science fiction, particularly involving the exploration of the wide open and uncharted space! I imagine this piece accompanying the beginning of a grand adventure into space and beyond our known galaxy. I made this in FL Studio, as usual. With Spitfire Audio's BBCSO Discover, Intimate Strings, and Epic Choirs. For this, I wanted to produce something that felt like the start of some wild foray into the stars, but with that hesitation of going into the unknown. The uncharted. Hope you all enjoy the listen and looking forward to hearing your thoughts! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted January 18 Share Posted January 18 Hey @Layne, The opening double bass passage is very well written which prepares the scene. The playing of B and Bb is interesting for me, with a funny occasional Eb minor chord. The next section with the glockenspiel is lovely with the timbre, and the ending on the struggle between Eb and D is well crafted. If I am going to suggest something I think you can change the harmony more! It’s more or less G major, g minor and Eb minor here and I think different chords like B minor/major or C sharp minor/major would be great! Thx for sharing! Henry 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Layne Posted January 19 Author Share Posted January 19 13 hours ago, Henry Ng Tsz Kiu said: Hey @Layne, The opening double bass passage is very well written which prepares the scene. The playing of B and Bb is interesting for me, with a funny occasional Eb minor chord. The next section with the glockenspiel is lovely with the timbre, and the ending on the struggle between Eb and D is well crafted. If I am going to suggest something I think you can change the harmony more! It’s more or less G major, g minor and Eb minor here and I think different chords like B minor/major or C sharp minor/major would be great! Thx for sharing! Henry Thank you so much, Henry! Always appreciate your well written and very helpful feedback! I will come back here with some adjustments soon! Thank you for the listen and the feedback. I'm always looking to improve my works! Especially given my lack of training, haha! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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