Aw Ke Shen Posted January 28 Share Posted January 28 (edited) Third published Waltz, a continuation... And as always, any casual comments or more serious feedbacks appreciated! https://musescore.com/user/62605720/scores/14024029 Edited January 28 by Aw Ke Shen Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted January 28 Share Posted January 28 Hi @Aw Ke Shen, The 14 bar phrasing of the first phrase is interesting. The repeated Bb in the first section is for me repeated quite too much haha! And what is the tremolo marking in b.85? It’s so hilarious in the computer rendition, but I am not sure it will be playable in real life under the tempo! Maybe you can introduce new themes in the slow section instead of repeating the previous themes but only slowing them down! But I think it’s a previous works of yours so it’s just a composing progress! Thx for sharing! Henry 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aw Ke Shen Posted January 30 Author Share Posted January 30 On 1/28/2024 at 9:46 PM, Henry Ng Tsz Kiu said: And what is the tremolo marking in b.85 Oh yea...thanks for pointing out! I have changed the tremolo to one slash in the ^score itself. I need to be more mindful next time! On 1/28/2024 at 9:46 PM, Henry Ng Tsz Kiu said: repeating the previous themes but only slowing them down The themes are different, but I think the same motif within the themes make them quite similar. Maybe I'll need more distinction or something completely different. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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