OpusDopus Posted February 11 Share Posted February 11 Hi, This piece was originally written for Flute, Violin, Viola, Double Bass. I think it sounds better as a String Quartet. The score needs a little cleaning up. Anyway, thanks for listening. Comments are always welcome. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Quartet15 > next PDF Quartet15 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OpusDopus Posted February 11 Author Share Posted February 11 Oh....If anyone can tell me how to name this piece I would be grateful. I called it a Quartet, but that doesn't really fit (does it?) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quinn Posted February 17 Share Posted February 17 (edited) It's delicate and warm but I started to lose interest because it never seemed to move away from B major. If it did, it returned quickly enough that I missed it. I also felt more variation was needed in the thematic material and a change of accompaniment here and there. My last point is the lack of dynamic variation. (There are no dynamic in the score - admittedly you say it need a bit of a tidy up. Add in some slurs too.) So for a 6 minute piece in a diatonic key there's no climax or build up. The one good / interesting feature is the ending! A few modulations, some development, more variation in the dynamics could turn this into an engaging piece. It has much potential. Edited February 17 by Quinn typo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OpusDopus Posted February 20 Author Share Posted February 20 Thank you for your reply ( and the time you took to make it). This is exactly what I am looking for. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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