June 24, 20241 yr So i wanted to make happy chill song and i came up with this. Might still need some chamges but i' mot sure. What do you guys think? Hey i just reaalised i can link youtube lol😅 edit: i'v made some small changes to couple of fragments that were pissing me off 😄 Edited July 6, 20241 yr by General Pokopo changed mind
June 30, 20241 yr Hello @General Pokopo and welcome to the forum! This lays down a kind of funky groove/beat! It then seems like the little ornamental motifs you add in the various synths/instruments are just improvising. But what seems to be missing to me is a main theme somewhere in the beginning for the listener to latch onto and contextualize all the improv that happens after. For the whole duration of the 5 minutes of this piece you keep the beat and the harmony changes exactly the same though - it would've been nice if that changed somewhere in there for a bit of contrast. Thanks for sharing!
July 6, 20241 yr Author Hello my friend. I was thinking of piano parts and the repeating whistlikng sound as main motiff for this one,but maybe its more like background noise 😄. The other instruments definetly were not improvisations😢 i wonder why the sounded like that, is it because they are not repeating and arent placed in correct order? And for changes in tempo and harmony i want to deffinetly work on this in the future because its my biggest weakness i feel. Have a good day 🙂
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