January 18, 20251 yr Hi everyone, I’m new here! I’ve seen a few other pieces of music shared here, and it seems like the perfect place for me to join in. I’m a French student, and I’ve spent 12 years studying piano at a conservatory. Recently, I’ve started composing, and I feel confident enough about what I’ve created to share it with you. Right now, I don’t have anyone around for active listening, so I have no idea how to assess the quality of my compositions. I’d really appreciate honest feedback (whether it’s theoretical or just based on your feelings) to understand where I stand and how I can improve. I hope you will feel as much emotion listening to it as I did composing it 😀 Thank you in advance for your time and your insights! I don't know what style the song stand for.
January 29, 20251 yr He man, this is very chill song, it has this happy sad felling about it. Like if you had a depression but you are good now and you look in to the fture and believe its all gonna be good 😄 . One thing, around 1:05 i think there is too much going on with the strings, im not sure but i think if u toned it down a little it would be better. Other than that i have no complains :] I really enjoyed it, nice work!
February 6, 20251 yr Author Thank you very much! I'm trying to build some tension there while holding back just enough to save the big explosion for the final part. 🙂 The fact that you're not telling me it's missing anything makes me feel better. I was thinking of adding a vocal line on top of the track, but I'm not sure if it would sound good. Do you guys think a voice over it would fit?
February 11, 20251 yr Hey, It all depend on execution. I guess if you have an idea you should at least give it a try.
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