Fugue in A minor(From the Langloz Manuscript)

Hello! This is my realization of the 31st fugue from the Langloz manuscript. I would love to have some feedback on it.

Fugue Realization:

Langloz Manuscript 31.pdf

Partimento bass is below

It has parallel 8ves between mm. 4-5, 10-11 & in m. 13 between the bass and the uppermost voice. In m. 12 the last note of the middle voice should be an E crotchet because the G also appears as a passing dissonance in the bass. The tail of the subject in m. 5 should lead to the same countermelody introduced in mm. 2-3. In m. 7 you wrote a 6 4 chord on the 2nd beat; there should be a D in the middle voice according to the figures given.

Hi! Sorry for the late response but is this better?

There's improvement, but some dissonances are still not well resolved. See below for a few ideas—though you may want to reduce movement in quavers to better align with the keyboard style.

EDIT: added a 2nd version