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"I wasn't sure whether to give you this badge or "Star Performer" since I don't know if you played this with a friend! But congratulations on getting a live recording of your music!"

Celloliver was awarded the badge 'Recording Artist' and 5 points.

In an effort to actually get something done, I challenged myself to write and record a little piece in two hours; behold the result!

The recording definitely got put off until the end. It's pretty out of tune/bad quality, but, I hope, bearable to listen to 🙂

Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated!

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Hello @Celloliver and welcome to the forum!

This is a modest little piece!  I do have to admit that often, with the double stops and two cellos playing together it can sometimes get a bit muddy.  But you do often have the melody in the highest range of the cello which is a beautiful expressive tessitura for the cello.  I like the main melody and I can definitely follow the melodic line throughout the duration of the piece so it seems to me like you're not a total beginner to writing music!  Great job and thanks for sharing!

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