January 14Jan 14 @Vonias Wow, I didn’t know your church would be singing it! What an honor. In that case, I’d like to offer my feedback if you’ll accept it. I really like the beginning section in mood, and I like how it’s more tonal than what you put into the AI. When I listened to it first, I thought the beginning Ooh’s were a non-lyrical version of the first verse of a hymn. Looking back they’re not, but if you made them so I think that would be a lovely beginning and certainly in style in the choral atmosphere I’m a part of. It’s like a precursor of what’s to come. If you were to go in and edit this, the biggest thing I think you should work on is the form. The first section is only 6 bars and doesn’t quite end on a rhyme scheme. I would recommend making it 8 bars and rhyme, in a period or sentence form if you can make it (those are the two clearest, most liked forms). Then go into the final section and make it similar 8 bars, but more final. Then you can end on an Amen if you’d like, and the whole would sound more fitting and like each part relates to each other. As a minor thing, I think having piano the whole time would be fitting for a more contemporary sounding piece. I don’t quite know what you’re asking about tradition, but I don’t think starting with an amen, or singing an aeuouae “Ah eh ooh oh ooh…” on a descant would make much sense musically, so I think the tradition in those two areas is fitting and helpful. I don’t think tradition is the only or best way on its own, but when it proves its own principles, I think you get a higher quality result when sticking to it. Would you mind checking out my piece and offering some feedback please?
February 24Feb 24 Vonias Wonderful composition, so lovely and spiritual,and the vocal choir is Amazing, the sort of sound you hear in Big Films Iv never heard any thing like this ...thankyou ,and i wish you every success in life.
19 hours ago19 hr Author Thank you, Interlect! The same to you! Be sure to check out my website if you want to make some notes spiral out of control in music:www.atonalfugue.net
1 hour ago1 hr Author 13 hours ago, interlect said:Thanx VoniasI dont know how to use your website...any instructions available ?No instructions, yet. I'd be happy to oblige to creating them. Here's a background of the style of music the website was born from:Atonal Music | Definition, Examples & Background - Lesson | Study.com
45 minutes ago45 min Thanx VoniasOnce i got to the "Generate 12 tone row".....i was expecting a PLAY-BUTTON , but its missing,so there's nothing to hear ?
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