femboy_sharky Posted January 29 Posted January 29 At 14, Adam talked about summer dreams On the train and he's laughing with me Talkin' 'bout skateboards, his cat, and the girls that he likes I ask, “Have you got someone in mind?” She’s at the all-girls school He says something about loving her smile Suddenly questioning mine بياخد مخدرات و هو بيتعلم سواقة بيقضي وقت معاها He likes a girl, he likes a girl He likes a girl, he likes a girl And I'm not a girl, I'm not a girl I'm not a girl, I'm not a He likes a girl, he likes a girl He likes a girl, he likes a girl And I'm not a girl, I'm not a girl I'm not a girl, I'm not Used to pretending I'm cool مش ھاقدر أشرح Why my stomach is tangled in blue احساس جدید لیا He’s half-French with a crooked grin Cherry cola, bright on his skin Wasted on some girl who lets him win But why do I feel hollow within? Why am I burning? ما تفوق شوية He’s not your boyfriend He likes a girl, he likes a girl He likes a girl, he likes a girl And I'm not a girl, I'm not a girl I'm not a girl, I'm not a He likes a girl, he likes a girl He likes a girl, he likes a girl And I'm not a girl, I'm not a girl I'm not a girl, I'm not a girl I'm not a girl F**k that girl. Quote
Aiwendil Posted 8 hours ago Posted 8 hours ago I hope you don't take this the wrong way, but I'm not really sure why you're posting these here. This is a music composition forum, and you're posting lyrics without music. We can't give feedback on them as music compositions. I think perhaps a creative writing forum would suit your purpose better, and would yield better feedback for you? 1 Quote
femboy_sharky Posted 1 hour ago Author Posted 1 hour ago I appreciate your suggestion regarding the inclusion of instrumental music or vocal performances. The sole reason I have not incorporated such elements is that I am currently unfamiliar with the process of uploading or sharing them on this platform. Nevertheless, I appreciate your input and will certainly consider it in the future. Quote
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