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Sonatine

649 Bars, 10 Minutes and 23 Seconds

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https://musescore.com/user/96214813/scores/31853885

Yes! I self-taught myself to export stuff! (Not here, Tristan...)

 

A cheerful Sonatine in D Major. Written, to guide composers' into the Sonata Form and how a classical era sonata looks like, although, nevertheless to say, as my works always are, it is also technically demanding. I would say, around Henle 7, maybe?

 

3 Movements, Fast-Slow-Fast (Ternary-type)

Allegro, Sonata Form, D Dur, 173 Bars, 3 Minutes 23 Seconds

Largo, Ternary Form (Ternary Form in a Ternary form?), G Dur, 71 Bars, 2 Minutes and 54 Seconds

Allegro, Rondo, D Dur, E Dur, D Dur, with a Coda, 405 bars, 5 Minutes, 6 seconds

 

Thanks for listening! (If you did...)

Sonatine.mid

 

 

(Just realized, no repeats are played in Midi...)

Sonatine.mid

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Hi @TristanTheTristan!

It's a vigorous sonatina brimming with your youthful energy!  The only thing I didn't care for was the meaningless shows of impossible virtuosity.  I think you are not composing for a human being but rather for the computer program which is a shame.  Making music possible to be played does not make it worse which is something I don't think that you understand.  But even with that - I enjoyed many parts of the piece - the adventurousness of the 3rd movement especially.  But the 2nd movement was horribly boring and the melodies in the 1st movement were meaningless scalar passages.  There are so many parts of your piece that are mechanical and robotic that I won't go through mentioning them by measure number as it would be too herculean a task.  I don't know - don't you want to write music that could someday be performed?  Or do you want to be known as a midi or Musescore composer for the rest of your life?  Thanks for sharing.

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Hallo @TristanTheTristan!

Even your Sonatina has a length of a Sonata, I think it was wise to call it „Sonatina“ only, due to its youthful spirit and its refrain from the drama and heaviness of a „full-fledged“ sonata.

So it is a cheerful, enjoying piece at all!

However, what refuses me to count it as a piece that I would enjoy to put in my playing list is its hyperactivity expressed by the much to fast and repeating passages with ornamentations (trills, tremolos etc.) which heavily remind me on your signature „TristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristan ….“.

I can therefore only emphasize @PeterthePapercomPoser' questions about playability for a human performer and would love to hear the piece as it would be interpreted by a real pianist, whether it's a live recording or a recording from a MIDI file. In the latter case, however, more sensitivity to the technical abilities of a human pianist and their enormous nuances in articulation, dynamics, tempo, etc. would be required.

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On 2/20/2026 at 8:42 PM, PeterthePapercomPoser said:

Hi @TristanTheTristan!

It's a vigorous sonatina brimming with your youthful energy!  The only thing I didn't care for was the meaningless shows of impossible virtuosity.  I think you are not composing for a human being but rather for the computer program which is a shame.  Making music possible to be played does not make it worse which is something I don't think that you understand.  But even with that - I enjoyed many parts of the piece - the adventurousness of the 3rd movement especially.  But the 2nd movement was horribly boring and the melodies in the 1st movement were meaningless scalar passages.  There are so many parts of your piece that are mechanical and robotic that I won't go through mentioning them by measure number as it would be too herculean a task.  I don't know - don't you want to write music that could someday be performed?  Or do you want to be known as a midi or Musescore composer for the rest of your life?  Thanks for sharing.

 

 

17 hours ago, Wieland Handke said:

Hallo @TristanTheTristan!

Even your Sonatina has a length of a Sonata, I think it was wise to call it „Sonatina“ only, due to its youthful spirit and its refrain from the drama and heaviness of a „full-fledged“ sonata.

So it is a cheerful, enjoying piece at all!

However, what refuses me to count it as a piece that I would enjoy to put in my playing list is its hyperactivity expressed by the much to fast and repeating passages with ornamentations (trills, tremolos etc.) which heavily remind me on your signature „TristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristanTristanTheTristan ….“.

I can therefore only emphasize @PeterthePapercomPoser' questions about playability for a human performer and would love to hear the piece as it would be interpreted by a real pianist, whether it's a live recording or a recording from a MIDI file. In the latter case, however, more sensitivity to the technical abilities of a human pianist and their enormous nuances in articulation, dynamics, tempo, etc. would be required.

 

I could play this... 

Should I record?

6 minutes ago, TristanTheTristan said:

 

I could play this... 

Should I record?

 

Ps. Thank you for the stuff.

On 2/20/2026 at 8:42 PM, PeterthePapercomPoser said:

Hi @TristanTheTristan!

It's a vigorous sonatina brimming with your youthful energy!  The only thing I didn't care for was the meaningless shows of impossible virtuosity.  I think you are not composing for a human being but rather for the computer program which is a shame.  Making music possible to be played does not make it worse which is something I don't think that you understand.  But even with that - I enjoyed many parts of the piece - the adventurousness of the 3rd movement especially.  But the 2nd movement was horribly boring and the melodies in the 1st movement were meaningless scalar passages.  There are so many parts of your piece that are mechanical and robotic that I won't go through mentioning them by measure number as it would be too herculean a task.  I don't know - don't you want to write music that could someday be performed?  Or do you want to be known as a midi or Musescore composer for the rest of your life?  Thanks for sharing.

 

I tried to follow how Alkan wrote his sonatine.

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Hello! It's been a few days, but I feel I also want to put my two cents. I am a professional Pianist and have been for a few years going so far as getting my Masters Degree, and hopefully soon a doctorate in this field. I can understand Peter's approach with a few caveats in my opinion. I want to share my views as a pianist versus a composer:

When I read the title "Sonatine," I immediately think of the Ravel's piece of the same title. I have yet to do an harmonic and structural analysis of your work, and on the first listen, it is very much classical in style versus the impressionistic tone of Ravel. Simply an observation on this point. In terms of playing, what will stop anybody from playing this is the raw notation. It is my opinion that some decisions with the music came purely for playback purposes versus how it should be notated. After playing... probably at least 300+ pieces in my life (i've lost count...), you find there are standard notations for tremolos, trills, runs, embellishing passages, etc. 

MVT 1:
Measure (mm) 25: What is the left hand? I am confused if it is meant to be a triplet or quarter note on 1 with two eighth notes. However, that doesn't fit the beats in the bar... Same at mm. 34.
mm.45, why are the trills suddenly tiny? Are they meant to be played exactly, or are they only a suggestion?
mm.64 is a little weird in the right hand with such quick thumb hops. It would be better to alternate constantly than hitting the thumb twice. It's asking for tension.
mm.125, the left hand is still confusing and a little more so than before.

MVT 2:
Pianist's do not always need pedal markings to know when to pedal. Since you notated the pedal for the same rate, you can write it for the first few bars and at.. bar 5 for example, write "Ped. Simile". This tells us that you want the pedal to be the same the entire time. It also de-clutters the score and makes it easy on our eyes.

To the clutter point, there are too many systems on one page sometimes. It makes it overwhelming for our eyes. You can shorten the systems to 4 measures as a way to help or limit the mvt to 5 staves per page. It will make it really nice to see on the page. 

mm.11 is confusing in this movement as the left hand notation is broken and feels misplaced.

MVT 3:
mm.59... we... can't do piano-fortes on a single note... A piano cannot crescendo on a single note once it's been struck. So.. is it piano, or forte?
mm.74, I think it is better to write it as a 6-tuplet versus two triplets. Same at mm.90
mm.98-129. Be careful here, you keep the rhythmic pattern the same, but the interval sizes change all the time. This means the hand is constantly changing size and expanding and contracting. It will make it hard to play well, fast and consistent. It would be more comfortable if you kept the same intervals for longer. 
mm.146 onward: please just use the regular arpeggio sign. The one with the arrow is redundant and just means the same thing. It is uncommon notation for standard piano repertoire. 
mm.234: most likely, it will be played a little slower for clarity when done live. 
mm.386, yeah.... unlikely to be played that fast. Even with normal arpeggio fingerings, It will be played slower. mm.396-397 will be played as a glissando. Better to write that in too for clarity. 

Overall, it is very difficult and more importantly very uncomfortable for the hands. Specifically, you start the movements in a fine capacity, yet, it gets really hard to play near the ends of MVT 1 & 3. Please do not let this comment discourage you and I only wish to shed light into how a pianist would tackle this. It has potential to be programmed into a recital, and if you were to sit down and work out the kinks, I think the product will be swell.

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