I'll tuck my soul in corners deep - for Voice and Piano

A short song I wrote in two days. Do you guys have any critique on any "breathing issues" that may arise? Also do you think it ends too abruptly, or is it okay for a short piece? Though it's mostly classical, do tell me if it works in your opinion.

Note: I usually sing my own songs if I can--but this one was way too difficult for my cigarette-smoking, untrained throat to handle XD. So I used an AI-based vocaloid sort of. (Yeah, I kind of feel guilty for using an AI vocaloid, but everything else just sounds so trash, I wanna tear my hair out. Sorry ;_;)

Edited March 15Mar 15 by ComposedBySam

Well, that is very nice! I just stumbled on it; I've been more in the keyboard forum since March 15, the ides of March, for some reason.

Hi Sam

You have created a very strong melody within this track, and its quite adaptable to different versions too.

Iv created a Cover-Rendition of it in a "Hollywood-Big band" style

be interesting to hear your vocals with this version, easily done, if you want to send them to me via personal message,

and ill mix them into the alternative version, i cant read music , so this isn't 100% perfect, but a nice alternative-version, to your Great Song.