2 hours ago2 hr Like clock work version 2.mp3version 2.pdfHey. Any chances of getting critique on this composition?Thanks in advance.Some personal things i noticed:Overused rhythm – Effective but repetitive; lacks contrast and becomes monotonous.Sections that don’t fit – Some passages sound good on their own but feel disconnected from the main idea.Ideas needing polishing – Certain motifs or sections need refinement so they integrate better into the overall structure and narrative of the piece.Too much tension There is too much tension in the piece. It needs more release here and there.The main lead could be stronger and more interesting The main idea is pretty good but it is repetitive from the first round to the second round.Awkward transitions There is a few places where there are awkward transitions that needs to be fixed.more modulation The piece stays too much within the same key. Edited 3 minutes ago3 min by Bjarke
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